When i was in senior hig school, I and my friend hangout to mall with my favorite style. Before going to the mall i have a planning. I and my friend use a full of black acessories. I don't care about people comment for me. Because I like this style, I think gothic style is cool...
In mall many people see me with a seriously face. Start from my hairstyle to my shoes, hahaha... I looks rockstar at the time. Some poeple come to me, he talk to me ''you looks a Rockstar you know...?" and my answer is " now I just a band player, I vocalist, and a cosplayer next I hope to be a rockstar...
And next, I with my friend go to some cafe in mall. Terrace cafe is the real name of this cafe. In cafe I buy some drink. And then, 'surprise for me' in cafe like a some party, actualy accoustic nigth. I very like and fun. I want to sing a song in here. In this moment I sing some a song from one's of japanese band. The tittle of song is The pledge from Dir en grey band. I not believe, because the audience like my perform and give aplause. I think my costume make all of people in cafe doing that. I very happy for this nigth...

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